[Lyric] Moment Of Silence (TeMo Brown (me))

Today I made a Freestyle in rap battle. I am just starter so this is what I said. Can you tell me what you think? And Please take it in account that I am just starter and English is not my first Language. Thank You all!


little message to a friend, named MarkoMaxx
I know after you'll read this, you'll start cheap attacks
but anyways bro/ take it easy/ and relax.
I'm not gonna eat you like one of those morning snacks

I will work with you specially,
especially on your round rhymes,
James Blunt can cut man more badly
Even blunt gut some more sharp lines,

I'm sure you can't get punchlines,
than get punched in face by lioness.
I real talk even when I sleep-walking,
never cheap talking, my words are pricless

We are not even freestyling,
all you do is write,
But in real rap battle,
I would already finished you...
Ended your life!
I'm already in the building,
Where you came the first,
but now I overplaced your a$$
Yeah, now you can call me best

It's hard to battle to the guy
who you have never seen,
Now I'm feeling Stevie,
but wonder why I've never kill

Maybe becose killing fakes like you
will never make me real.
Your baby got a huge jack Man!
you know why? cos I've played there the real steel.

Sorry if I'm to hard for you, but your the first I ate,
Shit! It was not enough for me, should have gained some more weight
you might be getting high but I'm high flyer
Suck My verses, now your mouth is like a hair dryer

So brother, please don't be jelly
cos my rhymes are fresh and yours are smelly
You are shit, but next to you my shits shine like dimonds,
It seems like I murked you, take this MOMENT OF SILENCE!